Knowing Poem by Sonya Florentino

Knowing

Rating: 5.0


She could feel his eyes

on the nape of her neck

She could hear him

barely breathing

And wondered if one can

hear a heart

And a soul singing

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shashendra Amalshan 29 July 2009

this beautiful indeed, , , i loved this lines.... very moving and passionate write friend! ! ! with lots of lv shan

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C. P. Sharma 28 July 2009

Two bodies but one soul. A state of realization and bliss. Penned with masterly skill. CP

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Jasper Pane 27 July 2009

And so you ask can one hear a heart and soul singing? The answer is YES! For in your words I can clearly hear your heart and soul. Ahhhhh, what a beautiful song that you do sing.

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Alison Cassidy 26 July 2009

Intimacy penned sweetly and concisely. Beautiful poem. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Susan Jarvis 25 July 2009

So many emotions stirred in so few words - wonderful stuff! S :)

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Adeline Foster 12 November 2010

Great poem. Intent comes across clear. Adeline

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Duh Huh 01 August 2009

Very well done and said Sonya. I was barely breathing as i read. Thank you for sharing your talent with us.

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Surya . 29 July 2009

beautiful feel.beautiful touch. nice poem.voted10 surya

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Shirley Woods 29 July 2009

It's gorgeous - you can feel the air rise on the back of your neck. Beautifully done

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Paul Hansford 29 July 2009

A beautiful expression of an intimate moment. You leave open the question of whether he is aware that she is aware of him. Nicely done.

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Sonya Florentino

Sonya Florentino

Manila, Philippines (residing NYC)
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