She could feel his eyes
on the nape of her neck
She could hear him
barely breathing
And wondered if one can
hear a heart
And a soul singing
Two bodies but one soul. A state of realization and bliss. Penned with masterly skill. CP
And so you ask can one hear a heart and soul singing? The answer is YES! For in your words I can clearly hear your heart and soul. Ahhhhh, what a beautiful song that you do sing.
Intimacy penned sweetly and concisely. Beautiful poem. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
So many emotions stirred in so few words - wonderful stuff! S :)
Very well done and said Sonya. I was barely breathing as i read. Thank you for sharing your talent with us.
It's gorgeous - you can feel the air rise on the back of your neck. Beautifully done
A beautiful expression of an intimate moment. You leave open the question of whether he is aware that she is aware of him. Nicely done.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
this beautiful indeed, , , i loved this lines.... very moving and passionate write friend! ! ! with lots of lv shan