Last Night Poem by Khairul Ahsan

Last Night

Rating: 4.4


Last night,
Did someone flash in your thoughts?
Did some wavering ripples reach
The distant shores of your wandering mind,
After you had said 'Goodnight'?
When the eyelids closed, did your
Mind's windows open apart,
To look for a prying poet's face?

Last night,
Was it only he that passed a sleepless night?
And counted the ticking seconds of the clock,
And patiently heard the lizard's wisdom speech,
And the night guard's cautionary whistle?
Or, was it you too,
Who had the butterfly effect,
Of a simple whisper of love?


Dhaka
13 January 2015
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Madhuram Sharma 23 May 2017

very deep thought......

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Khairul Ahsan 25 April 2020

Thank you very much for the appreciation, @Madhuram Sharma.

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Unique drop, every bit of it seaks ur awesome mind and the butterfly effect, really the divine feel it gives, I enjoyed thanks sir

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Khairul Ahsan 25 April 2020

@V.m.saraswathy Munuswamy, Thank you so much for your inspiring words! Why aren't you writing any more here, on PH?

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Rajnish Manga 13 January 2015

With a tinge of suspense, you have surely come up with an outstanding romantic poem. The second half of the poem brings about the minutest details that capture the mind of a person anxiously waiting for sleep to come. I must thank you for the same.

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