Just... Poem by Khairul Ahsan


Rating: 4.9

Just a spark can kindle a fire
That can consume a forest,
Just a touch can spark a lust
And create a Mount Everest.

Just a whisper into the ears,
Can stop a baby from crying,
Another kind can send a man
Atop the Himalayas flying!

Just a smile can change a thought
It can untie the toughest knot,
It can mean a signal shot,
To make a cold bed sizzling hot.

Sunday, November 17, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: passion
Just a smile, a look, a touch, a teardrop, a sigh, a whisper or even a thought may evoke far reaching consequences. Deep emotional transformations can be brought about by just any one or more of these.

17 November 2013
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Naida Nepascua Supnet 22 November 2013

haha i enjoyed this poem it brings smile the lines are witty and will bring one into some thoughts.

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Valerie Dohren 21 November 2013

Much truth and wisdom in this write - it's the little things that can make all the difference, and indeed can change the world. Very well penned.

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Susan Lacovara 19 November 2013

Just enough...To uplift the heart...left me smiling, my friend...PEACE

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Kevin Patrick 18 November 2013

I love the rhyming in this its sweet and very sentimental, a truly rousing read.

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Ethan Ying 18 November 2013

So short, but so clear. I just loved the line 'Just a smile can change a thought It can untie the toughest knot, ' This is my favorite poem of yours that you have so far written.

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Khairul Ahsan 08 March 2014

@Martina Danielova I am so glad that you loved my poem. Thanks a lot for reading my poem and leaving your kind thoughts here.

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Khairul Ahsan 08 March 2014

@Morose Mermaid, Thanks for your kind appreciation of my poem. I am glad that you found it beautiful.

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Martina Danielova 02 December 2013

i loved this poem of yours. It is so enlightening. It remains us how little is enough to bring the peace and silence into our souls.

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Morose Mermaid 26 November 2013

just... a nice write indeed... really a JUST.. beautiful..

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Khairul Ahsan 23 November 2013

@ Naida Nepascua Supnet, Glad to see your smile. 'the lines are witty and will bring one into some thoughts.' Liked this line.

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