Anita Trivedi

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Last Night..... - Poem by Anita Trivedi

Thinking of You... such was my
Last Night.....
Holding pillow tight I was
searching Moon,
But it hided himself in the cloud.
I tried to cry, but these tears
didn't role out.
Thinking of You... such was
my Last Night...
For a moment it made me feel
You... sitting besides me,
But as I put my hands forward
to touch You,
I realized You were no where.
Thinking of You... such was my
Last Night...
I hold pillow more tight, as I thought
You going far away from me,
Tears role out as I thought of it,
And slowly a Moon came out of cloud.
Talking to him about You, such was
my Whole Night.
Thinking Of You... such was my
Last Night.....

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Comments about Last Night..... by Anita Trivedi

  • Subhas Chandra Chakra (4/24/2016 5:56:00 AM)


    I hold pillow more tight, as I thought
    You going far away from me,
    Tears role out as I thought of it,
    And slowly a Moon came out of cloud.
    Talking to him about You, such was
    my Whole Night.
    Thinking Of You... such was my
    Last Night.....

    A perfect poem dipped with tears of longing and pillow of a dream. The moon in your poem plays hide and seek. Hides and then reappears.
    Thanks for sharing the lovely poem.
    Subhas
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  • Ramesh T A (9/7/2010 3:07:00 AM)


    Longing is nicely expressed in this poem! (Report) Reply

  • (8/4/2010 11:56:00 AM)


    ‘Pillowing and Billowing’ ~ Terrific Metaphor…entirely noetic ride…and joyous…’Last Night’…is ever deferred to next …different flavor…enjoyed… Thanks for sharing
    Regards
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK
    10/10
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  • (7/16/2010 5:27:00 AM)


    You could have elaborated this a bit more it was a nice theme set out in a dark night.... (Report) Reply

  • (6/12/2010 4:52:00 PM)


    Wo Wo Wo.....Anita...You Rock....I could feel the intensity of the poem...Too Good...you were appreciating me? ? ? ? I can't write half as good as you.... (Report) Reply

  • Matt Mooney (5/13/2010 12:46:00 PM)


    A well constructed, well connected romantic poem. The moon is the central figure and the pillow plays the the part of the absent loved one. (Report) Reply

  • Dr.tony Brahmin (4/29/2010 1:50:00 AM)


    dear Anita,
    this poem of emotion of your secret longings! !
    Very nice. thank you for sharing this poem. God bless you. i sent you now another letter too. thank you anita! ! !
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, April 22, 2010

Poem Edited: Friday, May 31, 2013


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