Tuesday, December 29, 2009

Last Year Is Gone But The Next Years Are Long Comments

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My friend, last year is gone but the nest years are long.
Forsake the hurts that entered when some things went wrong.
Leave behind the memories that tortured you so!
Let heavenly goodness be your friend, not your foe.
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Obed dela Cruz
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Prashant Shaurya 02 January 2010

brilliant poem bro.. and the kind of motivation and encouragement you impart is just priceless.. the rhymes were beautiful and so was the rhythm...10+++ certainly regards prashant

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Rajaram Ramachandran 01 January 2010

Man is always living on hopes that the next year will be better than the last year. Your words are very much encouraging.

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Joseph Poewhit 01 January 2010

As the corks pop on the bubbly

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Kranthi Pothineni 29 December 2009

Water has no taste, no color, no odor; it cannot be defined, art relished while ever mysterious. Not necessary to life, but rather life itself. It fills us with a gratification that exceeds the delight of the senses.

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Nikunj Sharma 29 December 2009

Lessons in every stanza, that I take for myself.......... 1. Let heavenly goodness be your friend, not your foe.........what a divine thought here, simple and fulfilling and warming the heart.... 2.But may your main purpose be not just to be known.............lets not live to be known, lets know to live.....lets not do things for the heck of it....wowo is the word for this one.... 3.So cheer up my friend and be more than who you are.........stretch yourself beyond your self, this is what yoga tells us, this is what karma is, this is what dharma is..... 4. O, may the years of your life never ever end! .........also the life in in your years be there beyond the time....nice poem, simple sweet and assuming in every respect...thanks for sharing

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