{ Terza Rima Format Poetry }
The twenty carat gold in sky
Slowly losing its brilliance
Likely to hide being so shy
Over to west in a distance
Hiding by and by as it could
As if in slow tick tack cadence
Just to hide in a day for good
In loath to hide luster outright
As it's mandated, Sun should
And a must to fade in twilight
As its role for the day is done
For the heavenly show at night
Star Sirius said; 'It's our time Sun;
Hide! We're here now. I'm serious
I'm not kidding, now we'll give - fun
and so the sun hides in darkness
Sirius and guests show their brightness
Ency Bearis
(c) Copyright 2012
It is interesting.You have portrayed Sirius, the next brightest star, as one who waits for its turn..Good
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Like this very much, a new take on sunset. Very good.