' Late Afternoon Events ' Poem by Ency Bearis

' Late Afternoon Events '

Rating: 3.2


{ Terza Rima Format Poetry }



The twenty carat gold in sky
Slowly losing its brilliance
Likely to hide being so shy

Over to west in a distance
Hiding by and by as it could
As if in slow tick tack cadence

Just to hide in a day for good
In loath to hide luster outright
As it's mandated, Sun should

And a must to fade in twilight
As its role for the day is done
For the heavenly show at night

Star Sirius said; 'It's our time Sun;
Hide! We're here now. I'm serious
I'm not kidding, now we'll give - fun

and so the sun hides in darkness
Sirius and guests show their brightness



Ency Bearis
(c) Copyright 2012

Thursday, February 9, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: poetry,sun
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valerie Dohren 26 March 2012

Like this very much, a new take on sunset. Very good.

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Neethu Prasanna 09 February 2012

It is interesting.You have portrayed Sirius, the next brightest star, as one who waits for its turn..Good

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