I'm suing death
because I want more life
But time's the harsh judge
that is never on my side
Wow! , wonderful imaginary. We are suing death but Time is the harsh judge. A beautiful poem is well executed. I appreciate this poem. Thanks you for sharing. Full stars.
Ever so succinctly, you have brilliantly summed up the themes of: life and death; lifespan. A truly outstanding poem, Kevin! I always benefit from reading your profound poetry. Thank you.
Death will win eventually. Just ask for an extension of time.
Don't we all Kevin! But we all have a limited time on this earth Bravo!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
It's odd how I never thought of death when I was young and dumb and callow... I should have been thinking about it... a lot. Now I am old enough to think like you do in this dark but clever poem but I think the judge has given me my quota of extensions and my lawyer reminds me of me when I was young and dumb and callow.. A clever but very deep poem, Kevin. Top marks and onto my fav shelf