Leaf (Haiku) Poem by Captain Herbert Poetry

Leaf (Haiku)

Rating: 2.5


Fresh and Green to touch
Yellow then turns to dried Brown
Like our Age that Flies

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Morals have gone to extinction
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cynthia Buhain-baello 28 May 2015

A good Haiku and very nice comparison of a leaf and age. Try using small letters and not capitalization, the poem would look better that way.

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Bernadette Fernandez 25 May 2015

Time flies and our generations will leave but live

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Nancy Oyula 28 January 2015

I love Haiku........

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