Captain Herbert Poetry


I’m In Love With You - Poem by Captain Herbert Poetry

Your Stanzas are like your eyes that melts my heart
Your Lines are like your smile that softens my inner being
Your Themes are like your unique gestures that make me fall with you
You Titles are like your special message that deepens to know you more

VERSE me with your care
ODE me with your embrace
RHYME me with your share
PROSE me with your tender

I’m in love with you because you FLOW
like spring in the falls
I’m in love with you because your SYLLABLES
are like a zephyr in the skies
I’m in love with you because your RHYTHM
are like the heartbeat of blissful happiness
I’m in love with you because your METER
is like the immeasurable galaxies of passion

I’m in love with you, POETRY

Topic(s) of this poem: poetry

Form: Ars Poetica


Comments about I’m In Love With You by Captain Herbert Poetry

  • (4/19/2018 5:10:00 AM)

    Love your poem to bits (Report)Reply

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  • (10/15/2017 9:07:00 AM)

    This is really classic! I love it. (Report)Reply

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  • Bharati Nayak (7/8/2016 2:42:00 AM)

    Such a beautiful poetry- - Loved every line. (Report)Reply

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  • Edward Kofi Louis (5/16/2016 12:47:00 AM)

    Prose me with your tender! ! Love is the key! ! Nice piece of work. (Report)Reply

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  • (12/23/2015 2:03:00 AM)

    beautiful poem with beautiful presentation and picture. Keep it up Herbert Guitang. (Report)Reply

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  • Paul Elenora (9/18/2015 3:17:00 PM)

    Wow. This is beautifully written. I love it (Report)Reply

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  • C. P. Sharma (7/17/2015 1:28:00 AM)

    Wonderful love with the Muse. (Report)Reply

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  • Nicole Anne Sia (6/21/2015 6:16:00 PM)

    Now that's poetry! Truly amazing! ;) (Report)Reply

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  • Akachukwu Lekwauwa (6/7/2015 7:55:00 AM)

    This is classic Ars Poetica. I loved it. (Report)Reply

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  • (6/5/2015 2:38:00 AM)

    I'm in love with poetry, too. This poem really tickles my heart and thought. At first, it seems that your in love with someone but at the end I realized that you're in love with POETRY...you have a unique style of writing poems... (Report)Reply

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  • Naida Nepascua Supnet (5/27/2015 6:25:00 PM)

    Haha..i was caught off-guarded at the ending.. I thought it was a person
    And I reread and there I saw how I missed the clue words
    I like this poem
    It also made me smile
    Mabuhay.
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  • (5/22/2015 7:39:00 AM)

    I'm in love with your poem, poet Herbert.. God bless you. (Report)Reply

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/20/2015 7:02:00 AM)

    that deepens to know you more.. nice one...10
    expect more
    and learn too more
    it shall then add
    and strengthen your trade
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  • (5/13/2015 1:20:00 AM)

    You're love for poetry is excellently and passionately portrayed, in this poem.
    Very inspiring.
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  • (5/8/2015 11:29:00 PM)

    One of the best I've ever read. Beautiful creation (Report)Reply

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  • Ging Taping (10/14/2014 6:58:00 AM)

    Akala ko ito'y para sa iyong minamahal..Mahusay ang pag ikot ng iyong tula! Binabati kita.. (Report)Reply

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  • Ana Rose Trazo (8/5/2014 8:00:00 AM)

    poetry is a window where i can freely see whatever i want to see and shout whatever i want to say. i'm also inlove top it. (Report)Reply

    Captain Herbert Poetry(8/8/2014 2:45:00 AM)

    Wonderful words from you, Poet Ana Rose Trazo

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  • (7/16/2014 8:17:00 AM)

    Wow! Excellently written poem and the wording is just amazing Herbert. Really enjoyed reading this well penned poem and thank you for your comments on ma poems, I appreciate dear poet.
    Siya_! !
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  • Sonali Ganguly (5/16/2014 9:57:00 PM)

    beautifully written, nice composition.... (Report)Reply

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  • (5/6/2014 10:13:00 AM)

    ......Perfectly DONE (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, October 30, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, July 21, 2015


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