I’m In Love With You Poem by Captain Herbert Poetry

I’m In Love With You

Rating: 4.4

Your Stanzas are like your eyes that melts my heart
Your Lines are like your smile that softens my inner being
Your Themes are like your unique gestures that make me fall with you
You Titles are like your special message that deepens to know you more

VERSE me with your care
ODE me with your embrace
RHYME me with your share
PROSE me with your tender

I’m in love with you because you FLOW
like spring in the falls
I’m in love with you because your SYLLABLES
are like a zephyr in the skies
I’m in love with you because your RHYTHM
are like the heartbeat of blissful happiness
I’m in love with you because your METER
is like the immeasurable galaxies of passion

I’m in love with you, POETRY

I’m In Love With You
Wednesday, October 30, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: poetry
Ana Rose Trazo 05 August 2014

poetry is a window where i can freely see whatever i want to see and shout whatever i want to say. i'm also inlove top it.

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 16 July 2014

Wow! Excellently written poem and the wording is just amazing Herbert. Really enjoyed reading this well penned poem and thank you for your comments on ma poems, I appreciate dear poet. Siya_! !

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Mary Amrutha 22 November 2013

WONDERFUL poem and beautiful lines.. no doubt that you deserve ten on ten

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Lily Mccambridge 30 October 2013

That was a beautiful poem.

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Heather Wilkins 30 October 2013

I am in love with you too. You are my passion. nice metaphor

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Chinedu Dike 09 November 2019

Beautiful love poem well articulated and nicely brought forth from the heart. Lovely and very passionate. Thanks for sharing.

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The Muse 19 April 2018

Love your poem to bits

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Mary Neil Poisson 15 October 2017

This is really classic! I love it.

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Bharati Nayak 08 July 2016

Such a beautiful poetry- - Loved every line.

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Edward Kofi Louis 16 May 2016

Prose me with your tender! ! Love is the key! ! Nice piece of work.

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