Your Love Is Like The Planets In The Universe Poem by Captain Herbert Poetry
Your Love Is Like The Planets In The Universe
I want to be close to you like Mercury to see your full glow
and brightness of your intimacy
I see you like a Venus because of your unsurpassed beauty
and your unfathomable; the abysmal kind of love
You revolve like the Earth that gives a magnetic kind of force
to touch the core and mantle of our hearts
I see your ardent desires like a red Mars to fight as war to cover
and protect me
You give a gigantic precious tenderness and enormously
unselfish affections like a Jupiter
You give me snowball rings like Saturn that gives remembrance all beautiful
things that we had been in the atmosphere of treasure memories
Your warmhearted axis that tilts on the rocky core of my life
is like in a deep ocean of Uranus that clasps me with grasping arms
You are like the sea as Neptune that your gentle flows
like clouds that drift my soul
On a very far and infinite distance from your presence,
you are like a Pluto moon that travels with me
and you are always there for me orbiting within
Your Wonderful and Marvelous Love.
I love it, a beautiful write and i hope u chart well in your contest, wish of luck! _Soul
Beautiful poem of love. Most chrishing lyrics. " I see you like a Venus ".. Venus Anadyomene? 5 *s
The amazing glory of Love is aptly captured in the poem. Your employment of appropriate similes to drive home your conviction is poetically remarkable. Thanks for sharing Herbert.
I like how you describe the love using the pkanets! Very well written!
A magnetic kind of force! ! ! With the muse of sweet love. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Thumbs up! it's a poem made from the heart..