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Your Love Is Like The Planets In The Universe

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I want to be close to you like Mercury to see your full glow
and brightness of your intimacy

I see you like a Venus because of your unsurpassed beauty
and your unfathomable; the abysmal kind of love

You revolve like the Earth that gives a magnetic kind of force
to touch the core and mantle of our hearts

I see your ardent desires like a red Mars to fight as war to cover
and protect me

You give a gigantic precious tenderness and enormously
unselfish affections like a Jupiter

You give me snowball rings like Saturn that gives remembrance all beautiful
things that we had been in the atmosphere of treasure memories

Your warmhearted axis that tilts on the rocky core of my life
is like in a deep ocean of Uranus that clasps me with grasping arms

You are like the sea as Neptune that your gentle flows
like clouds that drift my soul

On a very far and infinite distance from your presence,
you are like a Pluto moon that travels with me
and you are always there for me orbiting within
Your Wonderful and Marvelous Love.
Captain Herbert Poetry
Wednesday, September 11, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: love
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COMMENTS
Chinedu Dike 11 February 2017
The amazing glory of Love is aptly captured in the poem. Your employment of appropriate similes to drive home your conviction is poetically remarkable. Thanks for sharing Herbert.
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Wilma De Guzman 23 August 2016
I like how you describe the love using the pkanets! Very well written!
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Sranisha Francis 12 June 2016
Thanks for sharing this poem with us. Thanks.
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Edward Kofi Louis 16 May 2016
A magnetic kind of force! ! ! With the muse of sweet love. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
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Josephine Tribiana 17 April 2016
Wow!
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Shahin Latif 28 November 2015
Nice work. Thanks a lot.
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Sofia Kioroglou 09 October 2015
Beautiful and lyrical!
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Paul Elenora 18 September 2015
Beautiful.
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Ramesh Rai 02 July 2015
Lovely write like the rainbow sucks all pains. Thanks for sharing +10.
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Naial Oniblab 13 June 2015
Poem filled with love, , , , love that every person in the world would wish for. Thank you for sharing.
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