Your Love Is Like The Planets In The Universe Poem by Captain Herbert Poetry

Your Love Is Like The Planets In The Universe

Rating: 4.4


I want to be close to you like Mercury to see your full glow
and brightness of your intimacy

I see you like a Venus because of your unsurpassed beauty
and your unfathomable; the abysmal kind of love

You revolve like the Earth that gives a magnetic kind of force
to touch the core and mantle of our hearts

I see your ardent desires like a red Mars to fight as war to cover
and protect me

You give a gigantic precious tenderness and enormously
unselfish affections like a Jupiter

You give me snowball rings like Saturn that gives remembrance all beautiful
things that we had been in the atmosphere of treasure memories

Your warmhearted axis that tilts on the rocky core of my life
is like in a deep ocean of Uranus that clasps me with grasping arms

You are like the sea as Neptune that your gentle flows
like clouds that drift my soul

On a very far and infinite distance from your presence,
you are like a Pluto moon that travels with me
and you are always there for me orbiting within
Your Wonderful and Marvelous Love.

Wednesday, September 11, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jeremiah Wilfred Arzaga 12 October 2013

Thumbs up! it's a poem made from the heart..

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Ronald Santarina 03 October 2013

very smart poem. full of emotion..

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Neela Nath Das 09 October 2013

Fabulous expression! Loved.

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Micah Tayco 03 October 2013

Very nice and beautiful poem.

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Unwritten Soul 21 October 2013

I love it, a beautiful write and i hope u chart well in your contest, wish of luck! _Soul

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Beautiful poem of love. Most chrishing lyrics. " I see you like a Venus ".. Venus Anadyomene? 5 *s

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Chinedu Dike 11 February 2017

The amazing glory of Love is aptly captured in the poem. Your employment of appropriate similes to drive home your conviction is poetically remarkable. Thanks for sharing Herbert.

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Wilma De Guzman 23 August 2016

I like how you describe the love using the pkanets! Very well written!

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Sranisha Francis 12 June 2016

Thanks for sharing this poem with us. Thanks.

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Edward Kofi Louis 16 May 2016

A magnetic kind of force! ! ! With the muse of sweet love. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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