Fervid Desire Within Poem by Captain Herbert Poetry

a very unique composition :)

This gives a powerful touching lesson on living life peacefully with others, in terms of forgiveness

I like how you put the title in your poem and gave it a whole surounding.

..........a beautiful poem narrating the impact of a poem on the poet and reader itself..............lovely write

Its a lovely poem. Live, forgive, and outlive with a poem I really like this line.

A beautiful work of art well articulated and nicely penned in persuasive expressions with conviction. Thanks for sharing.

To hope for your love. Nice work.

Live, forgive and outlive with a poem.With Insightful thoughts it is a great poem.

a perfect rhyme with a perfect theme A memorable poem

Your rhyme scheme is so on point, Herbert: -)