Leaves Of Sadness Poem by Aniruddha Pathak
Leaves Of Sadness
Leaves of sadness fall
Under eternal fall's pall,
Make a leafy wall—
A leafy dune not so tall,
My grief makes it tall.
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Senryu | 14.03.2019 |
A leafy dune not so tall, My grief makes it tall.....here is the essence of the poem, so depth and insightful. Brief but a beautiful poem is astutely delineated. Thank you very much dear Pathak sir.
Three of the top notch poets appreciating the poem. What more a poet can want?
A leafy dune not so tall, My grief makes it tall. - - - - - -A thought provoking poem.We all go through moments of happiness and sadness.That is but natural.But sometimes we think that our problem is very big and unsurmountable.This type of thought drives us into depression.
'My grief makes it tall' That's a very logical assessment. It is our sincerity and the enormity of our emotional touch with a given situation which can bring about that kind of a change. Thanks for this small yet a profound poem.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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I liked the title of this poem. Very captivating and apt for the theme depression and. despair. Wonderful and insightful poem. Beautifully written..
This poem came naturally some time back when I was feeling not so great. And thought it was rather too maudlin. Now, feel good that some of the poets whose feedback I value have liked it. Thanks indeed poet Rose Marie.