Tiku akp


Leaving Me - Poem by Tiku akp

You can come and you can go
You can live your life as you wish
I may feel a little sad
For I can't play with your hair
I can't put a flower in it
I can't get a cup of tea in the morn
Made by you
I can't get the fragrance of your body
In the bed when you come to lay by me
Life will go on
Achieving and losing is the game here
You must ensure you are happy
Your morning time with birds
And bees and flowers is going smooth
And rain won't disturb you
When you go to sleep and it beats
The window panes
You may remember me that time
Try to forget the old days

Topic(s) of this poem: life, love, sad


Comments about Leaving Me by Tiku akp

  • Poet Poet (10/10/2019 1:15:00 PM)

    PART 2.
    CALL A ROSE BY ANY OTHER NAME
    IT WILL STILL SMELL LIKE A ROSE
    SO SPAKE SHAKESPEARE
    ROSY IS ME MY POET DEAR
    you are REAL gold
    to all HUMAN HEARTS SOLD
    I AM PURELY ROLLED as GOLD

    AP SIR UR VOCAB IS RICH
    OUT OF NORMAL HUMAN REACH
    WE ARE ONLY ATOMS COMBINED
    IN UR WORDS AS ATMA DEFINED
    STILL IT'S FINE
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  • Poet Poet (10/10/2019 1:14:00 PM)

    BIRTH LIFE WITH LOVE OH AKP HOW LOVELERLY YOU SHARE WITH ME AND READ THIS
    CALL ME By any a name still I'm all the same, SAID 8Y 8 YEARS OLD SHANKRACHARYA TO HIS GURU WHEN ASKED
    CALL A ROSE BY ANY OTHER NAME
    PTONE
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    Anil Kumar Panda(10/14/2019 10:25:00 AM)

    This is really a great compliment for this small poet. feeling inspired. Thanks very much.

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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (10/10/2019 9:38:00 AM)

    I can't get the fragrance of your body
    In the bed when you come to lay by me.....expression of deepest love is amazingly portrayed here. A beautiful poem on love, life and sadness is astutely shared here. Thank you dear Panda babu, I vote ten from ten.
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    Anil Kumar Panda(10/10/2019 10:38:00 AM)

    That is a great compliment for a ordinary poet Sir. i am glad you have been always supporting. Thanks for sweet comment. Regards.

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, October 10, 2019



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