In the wee hours of the morning he gently kisses her
He caresses her smooth but old and tired body
The long-time lovers are making love in public
People old and young are somewhat astonished
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Hi Richard, I enjoyed this poem about music. Well done! Thanks for sharing. I am not familiar with Bob Mover, but I am familiar with nightime jazz performances with sax. Take care.
Pamela, I'm happy that you enjoyed the poem. And thank you so much for believing that it was well done!
I love the ending. Thank you.
THX so much, Jim. I need to write a few more poems with surprise endings. They're a lot of fun! Appreciate you adding this one to your favourites!