me poet yeps poet


Let Him Still - Poem by me poet yeps poet

In hope man lives....
hope you know
mans ink never dries....
till he finally
and
physically actually dies

all watch him as he lies
till the last he continues to try

and

so a drop or two does come through

and

another poem he can squeeze
with ease
as all come to see him
so to please

dying was he did you say
he lives on for many more a days

till the ink is wet again
for deliverance
ere he enters God's domain
and then after his ashes
no ink does remain

his pen breaks or burns
alas
sad tis
but isn't that life
Yes 'tis

Topic(s) of this poem: desire, hope, love, poetry, sex


Comments about Let Him Still by me poet yeps poet

  • Akhtar Jawad (10/19/2016 10:51:00 AM)


    You have given so many topics to this poem, desire, hope, love, poetry, and sex. I think the topic should have been life that covers all your topics. anyway, I agree you have written this wonderful poem that may be understood in at least five ways, your five topics. What is desire, a pleasant life. What is hope to be optimistic for a better life. What is poetry a mirror of life. What is sex to reproduce life with a bonus attraction of pleasure. But i don't agree with you as far as love is concerned. Love never dies. However, it's a lovely poem. (Report) Reply

    The Poet Poet The Poet Poet (10/22/2016 2:58:00 PM)

    poor rating anyway thank you AKHTAR

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  • Abhilasha Bhatt (1/10/2016 12:41:00 AM)


    A nicely narrated good poem...thanx for sharing :) (Report) Reply

    The Poet Poet The Poet Poet (1/10/2016 12:59:00 PM)

    thank u Abhi no grading?

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, January 9, 2016



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