Let It Fall Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Let It Fall

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Let it fall
Saturday,24th August 2019

Let the tears fall down
and make it known
that they are not from the weakness grown
and simply flown on the ground

it is a sacred flow
and allows
the women's plight
when something is not going right

how long can one bear the atrocity?
when it is considered as shame on humanity
everybody is aware of its continuity
yet we feel only regret and pity

I held it for a long time
and now it has broken all the doors of the dam
it is like gushing lava
with the commitment and firm agenda

It shall not on indefinitely
with the crime intended activity
we shall raise the banner
and show its result sooner

we are no lame duck
and allowed to be struck
with silence and tolerance
it will be met with stiff resistance

Hasmukh Mehta

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 August 2019

Cecilia Phillips Thank you for the poem hasmukh 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 27 August 2019

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 August 2019

Women got an outlet of suppressed pain like that of water breaking the dam in this lovely poem, sir, sending a powerful message that women won't suffer anymore. So beware. And the picture is beautiful. Sangeeta Das, Guwahati, Assam, Aug 26,2019

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 August 2019

we are no lame duck and allowed to be struck with silence and tolerance it will be met with stiff resistance - this sums up the grit and determination. A powerful read. TFS. Annapurna Sharma, Nellore, Aug 26,2019

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 25 August 2019

Monika Ajay Kaul Beautiful :) Thanks for sharing, Hasmukh Mehta Sir. 1 Hide or report this Like · Reply · 43m

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 24 August 2019

Ratna Ratih I

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