# Let Me....Be Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

# Let Me....Be

Rating: 5.0


let me
just sit back
and watch this life
as it hacks me
into bits and pieces
from an expression
i just become useful
even when i am tattered
may be...then
i was not a whole
what i tried to
i never expressed
...or may be
i was never understood

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Krishnarasa Seshadri 14 March 2010

I totally understand! Very well written! there's a lot of depth in here sir....

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Sarwar Chowdhury 14 March 2010

every man, i mean human, a mini universe to me. so it is not easy to understand as a whole. you penned finely. 0+

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Sathyanarayana M V S 24 March 2010

Very deep. I had to read it a couple of times to get to the roots of it. Fine work.

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Lady Grace 21 March 2010

i like the last line of this poem..''never be understood''..thats why we need to be transparent so that we should be understood.... i like the way it is written...smileeeeeeeeee

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 17 March 2010

yes, it is short and expressive. a bit scattered, but effective nonetheless. thank you.

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Siddharth Singh 17 March 2010

A feeling well expressed. All of us go through times when we feel, that no one cares or understands us and want to be left alone.

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Punsara Amarasinghe 17 March 2010

Dont be a pessimist to look upon down yur life....But as a poet yu have well expressed your deep ideas in very simple way.......Good poem i love it...!

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