let me
just sit back
and watch this life
as it hacks me
into bits and pieces
from an expression
i just become useful
even when i am tattered
may be...then
i was not a whole
what i tried to
i never expressed
...or may be
i was never understood
every man, i mean human, a mini universe to me. so it is not easy to understand as a whole. you penned finely. 0+
Very deep. I had to read it a couple of times to get to the roots of it. Fine work.
i like the last line of this poem..''never be understood''..thats why we need to be transparent so that we should be understood.... i like the way it is written...smileeeeeeeeee
yes, it is short and expressive. a bit scattered, but effective nonetheless. thank you.
A feeling well expressed. All of us go through times when we feel, that no one cares or understands us and want to be left alone.
Dont be a pessimist to look upon down yur life....But as a poet yu have well expressed your deep ideas in very simple way.......Good poem i love it...!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I totally understand! Very well written! there's a lot of depth in here sir....