Pamela lutwyche

Rookie - 23 Points (30.01.1953 / Birmingham)

Let Me Tell You A Secret - Poem by Pamela lutwyche

Let me tell you a secret,
one, which is quite true.

I am from another planet,
that is red, where this one is blue.

I saw your planet from way out in space,
when standing there one day.

I thought that’s where I will head,
so, I did and at first it seemed o.k.

I’ve been here now for many a year,
the violence is really bad.

And some of your people,
Are rather quite mad.

So, I’m heading home now,
home is where I will go.
I’ve stopped my roaming,
through the universe.
So’ it’s goodbye,
good luck cheery oh.


Comments about Let Me Tell You A Secret by Pamela lutwyche

  • Allemagne Roßmann (2/4/2010 11:43:00 AM)

    Very good story-telling attitude flaunted.Jay and Maxi will sleep now. (Report)Reply

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  • (7/17/2009 6:34:00 PM)

    Yes, a lot of violence, but couldn't you find anything good to keep you here? Actually, you might have a lot of company if they only knew how to be with you. (Report)Reply

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  • (3/28/2009 8:01:00 PM)

    hmm. great poem. its very interesting :) .. keep up the good work.. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, March 28, 2009

Poem Edited: Tuesday, March 9, 2010


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