Let Us Walk Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Let Us Walk

Rating: 5.0


Let us walk oh brother,
Without tension bother.
We are all children of God,
In his garden shining bud.

Let us blossom in right,
Hold all rays all of light.
Fighting is not solution,
War you leave in motion.

Emotion we have to feel
Of others you do not chill.
Hurting is not the right way
Love is alternative all do say.

Feel the mind and be kind,
In love all hearts soon bind.
Dazzling star twinkles light
Ever says only God is might.

Let us walk together brothers,
Time near us soon murmurs.
Glorifying God's name walk,
Let us in love ever all do talk.

© Kumarmani Mahakul,1 December 2014. All rights reserved.

Friday, October 14, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life,lifestyle,spiritual
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem is written on 1 December 2014.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 14 October 2016

picture of ⚽️Pitch Hiker⚽️ xthis was great I wish there were enough people out there that believed in this instead of fighting those cold wars Great write thanks for sharing 1 Dec 2014 by ⚽️Pitch Hiker⚽️ | Reply picture of honest harriet xIf the Bible were still being written I would love to see this in it. ;) Great wisdom. 1 Dec 2014 by honest harriet | Reply picture of Michael Heath xSuch an amazing poem you have written. Everyone should take the time to read this and gain such beautiful truth. Its been a pleasure to read. 2 Dec 2014 by Michael Heath | Reply picture of Chris Andrew Guillen xGenius. Absolutely. 26 Jan 2015 by Chris Andrew Guillen | Reply Note: These review comments are received through PF (Poetfreak)

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Isabel Pimentel 22 October 2020

We are children of God and we should walk together. This poem carries valuable advice.

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Valsa George 03 September 2019

Let us all unite together in brotherhood....! We should be able to feel the sorrows and joys of others. Should never keep a grudge for anyone, but be kind and sweet to everyone ! An edifying piece of advice in a meaningful poem!

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Pushpendra Patel 27 February 2019

Walking with unity is nice. Leaf carries letter. Calmness is inside own mind. This we should feel. Soul is pure. Nature impacts on soul. This is a great poem and you are a nice poet.

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Edward Kofi Louis 17 October 2016

Glorifying the works of the truth. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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M Asim Nehal 14 October 2016

Let us all walk to the light, truth, love and purity...The essence of your poem is fresh as ever, Thanks for sharing.

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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