Nosheen Irfan

Gold Star - 51,482 Points (Lahore, Pakistan)

Let Yourself Go - Poem by Nosheen Irfan

Let yourself go
Smooth as the touch of petals
Kissed by the morning dew
It's the call of life
Loud as the roar of laughter
Amidst a solemn silence
You cannot run away
Life breathes through every part of you
Feel it moving between your body and soul
Lifting you above the mundane day
Carrying you beyond the familiar way

Let yourself go
Around the wayward paths
Touched by the stormy dust
It's the beat of life
Regular as the morning chirp
Of birds greeting the day
You cannot escape
Life throbs in every nook and corner
Sense it with every part of your being
Inviting you to discover and explore
The wonders hidden from shallow sight.

Topic(s) of this poem: life

Comments about Let Yourself Go by Nosheen Irfan

  • Robert Murray Smith (10/27/2016 7:50:00 PM)

    Let Yourself Go
    Nosheen, this poem of vibrancy, weaves the joy of life through every stanza. The last stanza invites all to look for the yet unseen. If we take the offer up it will make for an interesting life. ++10

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  • Michael Walkerjohn (5/14/2016 2:03:00 PM)

    Aloha Nosheen...

    The wonders hidden from an enlightened sight... There is nothing shallow within this beauty of a prose... IAM knows this explicitly... Your soul sings wonderfully! and to you I offer my most polished dime... All of the best from this life, to you, and all of your relations... Michaelw1two
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  • Akhtar Jawad (1/15/2016 3:47:00 AM)

    Life breathes through every part of you
    Feel it moving between your body and soul
    A thoughtful poem.
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  • Edward Kofi Louis (1/11/2016 2:50:00 PM)

    And loved by the evening rose. Nice work. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, January 8, 2016

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