Letter's From The Sky Poem by James McLain

James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By

Letter's From The Sky

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Can letter's like tear's rain down from the sky
As I look up, you turn away.
How will I know if I set you free,
Do you feel like me, that forever our love is gone?
I was made I thought you knew,
To kiss your lips, no other lip's have I ever kissed.
I had you and you had me,
Together in life throughout these night's.
Can you see that far off star grow even closer
I look now,
Just to fall into the darkest part of the sea.
Can you wait as I watch,
Everyone's coming to see just what I've lost
Begging off
To be what you wanted me to be, time is short
And space is lost fading far away.
I've lived up to what you wanted from me, turn and
Look what's left of me, as I fade away.
In my dreams when deep in sleep, your coming back
To set me free,
Cause letter's like my salty tear's are falling from
The sky.



Copyright © James McLain | Year Posted 2018

Sunday, January 28, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: green
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 29 January 2018

(continued) some favorite lines: Do you feel like me, that forever our love is gone? I was made I thought you knew, To kiss your lips, no other lip's have I ever kissed. and: I've lived up to what you wanted from me, turn and Look what's left of me, as I fade away to MyPoemList...........bri ;)

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Bri Edwards 29 January 2018

letters aka letter's........? i wonder if you mean like 'love letters', 'friendly letters' etc. OR you mean like a, b, c, d, etc. i believe this shall end up in March showcase, once i get around to it; it will be a 'while'. For the most part, i follow the poem. as the Topic states, the poem IS very green. ha ha. as is often the case i THINK you are using apostrophes where i would not and once where i would. other times i agree with your usage. (to be continued) .....

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Debendra Majhi 29 January 2018

letters like my salty tears are falling from the sky....poet you have treated this poem in a very sensitive manner. Thank you

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Bernard F. Asuncion 28 January 2018

James, such a well penned poem...10+++

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