Letter To Dear Son Poem by v.m.saraswathy munuswamy

Letter To Dear Son

Rating: 4.3


Dear son.....
A day with out me
will come one day, but
you be the sun to raise and
shine giving warmth to all.

I wish you should learn
to move on.......
you be a light to lead others
and glorify your given life.

I could be the shooting star
or a guiding beacon
you be the pampering moon
and live in gratitude.

Believe in self,
with an optimist mind
to develop even the negative vibe around
as unlimited imprints of hope.

By the grace of god
and honours to endure
virtuously elevate your life
as a gracious gift to touch the pinnacle.

Friday, August 19, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: letter
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
dear son learn to live without my support or presence
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 21 August 2016

A light to lead others with the works of peace and love. Thanks for sharing. With true love to your son. He should heed to your words.

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Sure with the blessing and guidance, thanks for the wonderful review

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Tony Adah 20 August 2016

Wonderfully penned. The donkey had said now that she has a foal, her back will rest. We must wish our children well to be better and more functional than us. Please find time to read mine too.

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Thanks for the comment and invitation sure to read as much as possible and review, dear poet welcome again

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Anil Kumar Panda 20 August 2016

What a moving drop. Touched my heart. Parents are always happy when children grow to be a good citizen and get to the height in their fields. Very very nice. You are awesome.

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Thanks for the positive review, it's like cherry on cake, thanks dear poet

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Unnikrishnan E S 20 August 2016

Hi Saraswathy, Son or daughter, it is every parent's endeavour to see the offspring stand on his/her own legs. Beautifully written. My prayers with you and your son!

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Welcome, very true, hope it is the dream of every parent well said thanks poet

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