Letter To My Other Half Poem by Sabrina ,

Letter To My Other Half

Rating: 5.0


we share the same body
but you won't answer my calls
in search for your forgiveness
I write you this letter

I'm grateful for all the time you supported me
and walked me through so many places
but I fear we won't ever talk again
I miss you so much

sorry I disappointed you
and I let you get hurt
take all the time you need to heal
I won't abandon you

worshipped from the throne
you will be my emperor
it is my time to pay the tributes
and I won't complain

everyday I wake up and you are still asleep
I carefully put you in the wheelchair
from where you can rule my world
sorry I left you paraplegic

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ershad Mazumder 01 February 2009

Really it is a very good poem. Keep on posting and share with friends.

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Sarwar Chowdhury 21 June 2009

fine indeed! well thought out. 10+

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Saadat Tahir 13 May 2009

hi Sabrina, its such an awesome expressive piece with a twist really liked it...great lines cheers

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Kranthi Pothineni 21 April 2009

Once again the pain is felt. Yes its really courageous of you to write it out. A letter to your other half is really expressive.

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Jerry Hughes 05 April 2009

This is so sad Sabrina, however, courageous of you to write it. Fondly, Jerry

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Akram Awadat 05 April 2009

wow very nice lines, well done i like it, thanks for sharing

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