Liar! ! ! Poem by millie st.claire
Liar! ! !
You said I
was your everything
You said I...
was the one
You played me
like a radio
You used to love that I...
had no shame
Put my pain into words
hold my hand to the flame
Tell me you love me like a star
Tell me you want me wherever you are
Tell me you'll breathe me till your last breath
Liar liar.
Bit by bit
I feel my draft; just sit back
and watch it burn
Hold your eyes to my veins
Call out, call out my name
Tell me you love me like a star
Tell me you want me wherever you are
Tell me you'll breath me till your last breath
Liar liar.
That is gorgeous, the repetition really impacts the writing, love it, good write...
I love you where ever you are.......nice..... <3Payy
Millie, very strong piece of writing....true emotion...lies are the words of the devils mail..........great piece Millie, keep expressing warmest regards Jon
u have good structure throughout the poem and i love your word choice great poem keep up the good work- Sabrina
Effectively penned, a real feeling it generates.. liar is a liar..convincing.. good write.. Rema
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I would like to translate this poem
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12/6/2025 10:36:19 PM # 1.0.0
awesome poem millie. i like ur use of words! ahaha, faves!