Life Poem by P A NOUSHAD (SHOMSI)

P A NOUSHAD (SHOMSI)

P A NOUSHAD (SHOMSI)

PATHIRIPPATTA - po, KANDOTHKUNI, Kakkattil-via, Kozhikode, Kerala, India

Life

Rating: 4.8


Ripples form,
widen,
disappear,
I like to use the word 'merge'
instead of 'disappear',
then evaporate,
being rain, mist, snow,
pat the earth
and ripples form again
in the same ocean.

Life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mroy Jose 15 May 2008

great style of writing.

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 26 September 2008

Your poems have roots deep down somewhere. This one is simply fantastic. Thanks.

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Kerrial Newham 10 February 2009

i enjoyed, this poem, thank you for sharing.

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Howard Savage 07 February 2016

This is a great poem with strong metaphors. Keep writing, good work.

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Terry Dawson 02 October 2015

I see the repeating patterns of life and of nature. What was it you saw that made you to write thus?

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 18 April 2010

Finish is fantastic… I see the stars/descending into the ocean/in silence. Thanks for sharing Voted 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK

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wael karameh 01 January 2010

the theme is very deep, nice work.

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Konjit Berhane 10 June 2009

Great Poem... i was expectin some thing....when i read the title silence... but u got a great angle there... keep them comin peace

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P A NOUSHAD (SHOMSI)

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PATHIRIPPATTA - po, KANDOTHKUNI, Kakkattil-via, Kozhikode, Kerala, India
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