Life Break Myself apart
Into thousands parts
I am standing in the Dark
Valley of death in the life's parks
People are hurting me bad
But your presence make me glad
You always make me Strong
You Get me out from the wrong
You always Take Care
Because you are so near
Very beautiful..... You always Take Care Because you are so near
Valley of death in the life's parks very fine expressions you have in your poem. But you are not alone. 'There is someone who stands by you to support you. thank you a very nice poem.
thankyou all well am only 17 year old i don't know much but i try to express my feelings
Nice poem. He creates life. And he is the One. Read my poems about Him, if time permits
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
welcome at poemhunter, Zahra. Keep on writing
thank you