Life Poem by Zahra Baloch

Life

Rating: 4.5


Life Break Myself apart
Into thousands parts
I am standing in the Dark
Valley of death in the life's parks
People are hurting me bad
But your presence make me glad
You always make me Strong
You Get me out from the wrong
You always Take Care
Because you are so near

Life
Friday, September 25, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life and death
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
In life we face so many problems but there is always One who never leave us alone Our God
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fabrizio Frosini 25 September 2015

welcome at poemhunter, Zahra. Keep on writing

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Zahra Baloch 27 September 2015

thank you

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Anita Sharma 25 September 2015

lovely write..liked much

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Sranisha Francis 01 October 2015

Very beautiful..... You always Take Care Because you are so near

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Dr Antony Theodore 27 September 2015

Valley of death in the life's parks very fine expressions you have in your poem. But you are not alone. 'There is someone who stands by you to support you. thank you a very nice poem.

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Zahra Baloch 30 September 2015

thanks

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Zahra Baloch 27 September 2015

thankyou all well am only 17 year old i don't know much but i try to express my feelings

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Muhammad Ali 25 September 2015

Nice poem. He creates life. And he is the One. Read my poems about Him, if time permits

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Kelly Kurt 25 September 2015

Thank you sharing, Zahra. Keep writing

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Zahra Baloch 27 September 2015

thank you i will try to write better next time

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