Life Poem by rinki nandy


Rating: 5.0

Tell me please why do i have to live you if there ain't a reason to carry on,
show me please the way to live you with content only because i am surviving,
why is it that sorrow is more than joy? , why there are so many reasons to cry?

Teach me please a lesson of magic which can erase the despair,
do some repair to the lost and confused souls living you,
don't say...
“i am not forcing you, can live me as long as you want to”
coz this time there is no forgiving you.

Explain me please your idea of living, may i ask “why are you not so giving? ”
unanswered questions i gather, ignorance is all you delivered,
better keep quiet rather, silence is all you muttered.

Answer me please or am i talking to me? Have you a feeling for us? May be you like to see the dismayed us....
may be there isn't a place anywhere for us....this certainly isn't the end of us...
as you guarantee to abandon us.

Give me please a reason as the more i know you the more stupid you make me,
funny is the way you fool me,
don't know why people say “you are beautiful”,
when for you isn't really wonderful.


Raw and ribid with a touch of realism.

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Becca Leonard 28 December 2009

this poem is absolutly amazing! ! ! I love it!

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Kobik William 25 December 2009

life is always weird so 'shut ur eyes tight and open your ears wide so u might see clearer'. But I must say that was a gr8 poem worth a 10 from me.

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 22 December 2009

A straightforward realistic person-qua-person view on life has been described nicely in this poem. Keep on writing, rinki, you may get some answers about life but it's very difficult to have a straightforward clue or answer. Best Wishes. Naseer

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