Life Poem by Milica Franchi De Luri

Life

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Twiddling my thumbs
Crossing my arms

Sleeping in a bed
Living in my head

Building a nest
Inviting a guest

Singing a song
Done everything wrong

Going to the dance
Having a romance

Disabled with fears
Crying buckets of tears

Heart of gold
My soul I've sold

Puling my hair
Giving up in despair

Loving my dog
Saving the green frog

Reading a book
Cooking a chook

Seating in the dark
Strolling in the park

Getting old
Nobody to hold

Buried the dead
The living have flied

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
I Am Charlie 13 June 2009

check 'buried' and 'pulled'. Like the two line rhythm, very smooth. Especially like your 1,2, and 6th phrases... they're something i do constantly.

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Nikunj Sharma 25 June 2009

you have shown how life breeds itself in small simple things we do...... please read my poem called ' Lets Dream ' and CUP OF LIFE........ keep up th egood work

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Dr John Celes 16 June 2009

Well, but this is how life goes on for all! Nothing happens, the way we want.We live for the better morrow and should not brood over the sadder, faulty past.Not all can be saints. But certainly, we can do a lot of good and try to be better in the days to come.God is surely with each one of us.Why to worry then? regards, dr john celes

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Rommel Mark Marchan 15 June 2009

I DIDN'T PAY IT BACK THAT'S LIFE HOPE IT WILL BE PUBLISH IN READERS DIGEST ASIA I NEED CASH NOW SO I WRITE MORE ON STORY THE HUMUROUS AND LAUGHTERS FOR READER'S DIGEST

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Hannah Benson 14 June 2009

i like it me personaly could not ryme this much haha i do free verse more lol keep up the good work

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Ashraful Musaddeq 14 June 2009

'Getting old Nobody to hold Buried the dead The living have flied' Expressed life melodiously. But the last four lines are touching.10+++

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