Golden dust upon these sacred lands draws near, angels of personified beauty; yet we misunderstand their guidance for truth, buried deep below our shark filled oceans of unknown mysteries - rushing through woe contaminated lakes and streams.
Caressing pasts intertwine present and future, sparking new balances upon scales of law and justice, thus completing long painful cycles - erasing hardship - creating new currents that push us forward, towards priceless advancements; hence, stretching arms of our elders, push imprisoned souls away from poisoned, historic moments of the past.
Here we stand, white man holding hands with black women; singing carols, to free eternal lives of peace; rewriting treaties to reclaim prosperity for lands once forgotten in unfair games of Monopoly; forgiving those who cheated in games of solitaire, allowing access down new roads, to seek and accept friendship, between the many bloodlines of mankind.
Golden dust upon this sacred lands draws us near, ...here we stand white men holding hands with blackwomen, singing carols....what a great poem, there is a perfect analogy between the premable, the middle and the end. You did a nice work, it shows that racial barriers are thinnig down. I like it very much.10+++
mindblowing please keep writing.you are a great poet in the making
A very good poem; well written.A world devoid of racism should be the target of all.Well done.Keep writing for you are in the mould of a great poet.
Sounds like a blueprint for peace.What you say makes great sense.Well written.10(if I could register a vote) .
Here we stand, white man holding hands with black women; singing carols, to free eternal lives of peace; rewriting treaties to reclaim prosperity for lands once forgotten i......quite ingenious by imagery, well penned,10++++, thanks for sharing
yes...very true. a poem, very practical. a rare combination. wonderful though. thank you.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
a chnace discovery...hey, you are incredible, young lady!