~ LIFE DIVINE ~
Ms. Nivedita
UK
8 January 2010.
Resign and Consign
Delusion dedoping
Buoyant absolving
Souse dousing
Enjoy Life Divine.
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Complex and occult Divinity made simple and visible…in poet’s candid way… Thanks for this great write…in ‘water-fall’ scheme… AB 10+++ London
Wow! ! Hmm. Wisdomful …sleek satiny… Thanks 10++
Souse-a new word for me...liked the crispness of expression
Life is exactly that what you think it to be, I can't question the way you perceive it, but I can certainly see that your write is short and yet elegant!
And be bathed in bliss and pure in heart, though there's nothing really to add to the short and much to say of this poem. Just an association.
Sharp, blunt, short and straight fwd. Life is what you make it to be, it leaves you with no one but you to blame or credit to...a layout of your decisions n choices..deep emotional expression lightly described...b'ful write...
life divine is better as always.. we should really enjoy it.... nice write ma'am!
I give ditto to comments of Sr. Poet Ejaj Khan … Short but wide horizon … depth is unfathomable … 10+++ Dr. V
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
what a b'ful poem......with an absolute start...resign n consign... limited wordings making the meaning stupendous... i love this write...10 from my side...