Dreams break
Houses shake
Your heart is shattered
You got to live your life
Even if you know it's tattered
Life is not cake
Troubles in your wake
Your hopes lie cut up
The voices in your head don't listen to you
Even if you say shut up
You concentrate
Differentiate
But the troubles will be mixed up
In your somehow good life
Things are never gonna be fixed up
Your emotions need an outlet
But you find only an inlet
Of all disappointments, hopes, sorrows and joy
Cluttering your brain
But it's all a great big lie
Tattered life
Full of strife
Eating you to the marrow
Wish you could break everything
And fly away like a sparrow
Life is not a bunch of roses
Even if you have a few supporting crutches
Is it fair
To be robbed of
An only love's fair share?
Speechless! After reading this well penned and poignant poem that clearly shows your great poetic talent! I am so glad that you broke the ice and decided to post your first poem and definitely not your last since with the talent you got, you have long road to travel and impress the whole World with more of such thought provoking writes! 10+++ God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ...
Just read this beautiful poem. A mature work from someone of your age. 'Tattered life Full of strife Eating you to the marrow Wish you could break everything And fly away like a sparrow' - Wow! That's a beautiful observation! 'Is it fair To be robbed of An only love's fair share? ' - No, dear poetess, certainly not.
that is really good isabella. i would like to read alot more of your poems.
This was an amazing poem, be sure to check out my 'The Fake People' and comment, c:
Thanks guys for your encouragement..... I'll make sure that I share every poem of mine with you....
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Amazing, Philosophical. Imvite you to read my poems, Light a Lamp of Faith, An Innocent Village Girl, and comment.