Life Is A Desert Deserted Without Trees Poem by me poet yeps poet

Life Is A Desert Deserted Without Trees

Rating: 3.5


In the desert of life
there is no lover
no hubby
nor wife

A desert has no water
rarely any trees
where can you then find shades
to guard against the harshly hot breeze

no one does ever in the day freeze
the nights alone are lovely
in paradise we appear to be

an oasis emerges from the winds of no where
there is no horizon
sands detour all the time
till sunrises again

Breathe along with me
I am that desert in search of love
so lonely a commodity
like dates far up the tree
how can I taste thy love tell me

O you on camel back
an enemy

Friday, January 15, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love,love and friendship,love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Me Poet Yeps Poet 13 October 2018

an oasis emerges from the winds of no where /there is no horizon /sands detour all the time till sunrises again/ i am in search of love in the desert of love/ beautiful imagination./desert, life, love. tony Breathe along with me/ I am that desert in search of love/ so lonely a commodity/ like dates far up the tree how can I taste thy love tell me/.so touching and haunting. A beautiful poem on love and life based on metaphor has been astutely presented.10 kindness and thanks

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Dr Antony Theodore 13 October 2018

an oasis emerges from the winds of no where there is no horizon sands detour all the time till sunrises again..... i am in search of love in the desert of love.......... beautiful imagination....... desert, life, love. thank u dear poet. tony

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Kumarmani Mahakul 27 July 2018

Breathe along with me I am that desert in search of love so lonely a commodity like dates far up the tree how can I taste thy love tell me.........so touching and haunting. A beautiful poem on love and life based on metaphor has been astutely presented.10

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