jack green

Rookie - 44 Points (Chattanooga, Tennessee)

Life Is So Short - Poem by jack green

Smooth as glass above where never it rains.
Calm and quiet, so quiet the ear strains.
Color's so vivid they seem to have flavor.
Waiting for all where none are shown favor.
Walking a path with no clear destination.
Afraid to look back fearing my wakes desolation.
Cause and effect, no choices are given.
Running from truths that cant stay hidden.
Life is so short, why do we wish it away?
Where can i hide when come judgement day?


Comments about Life Is So Short by jack green

  • (11/19/2012 2:32:00 AM)


    Intense piece. (Report) Reply

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  • Mark Dillon (10/26/2012 11:06:00 PM)


    nice write Jack, i've had times when i wished the day would end, aye (Report) Reply

  • (1/4/2012 2:06:00 AM)


    Brilliant poem! - thought provoking - (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, December 7, 2011

Poem Edited: Wednesday, January 4, 2012


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