Life Is What I Make It - 20
Sheepish me was never...
Lone wolf howling at moon...
Rebel with noble cause
Fighting to justify
A wonderful poem on life with a punchy rhythm. The broken lines mimic raw thoughts. Liked the images of wolf and rebel with noble cause - depict courage in life. A brilliant capture of a powerful journey of personal transformation from self - doubt to purposeful and fierce independence
Rose Marie, I really love the way that you analyzed this poem! And you are right on the mark! THANKS so very much for your truly valuable constructive criticism. And for the 5 Stars!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Well crafted and well presented, Richard.