Life Not Perfect Any More Poem by Malabika Ray Choudhury

Life Not Perfect Any More



those days of childhood were perfect!
lived in a quaint little house, cradled among an exquisitely colourful landscape, where the breeze carried a tranquil lemon scent, and cooing birds serenade to a strangely mythical land.
a delightful swing - swinging away innumerable times…evoked passionate emotions of love and tenderness,
lots of playful frolic and exuberant laughter,
magical hide and seek, rainbow paper boats… unfolded a tranquil life flowing harmoniously like a chartreuse waterfalls descending on coral rocks.
and you - you were perfect!

you gave me the world…
a young girl's world full of neon dreams and saffron imagination,
you never forgot to celebrate our song of togetherness, among the hues of radiantly ravishing flowers,
which enveloped our senses with sublime feelings,
but, as much you tried, I tried,
that life fell apart,
our world was not perfect any more!

can you give me back those ecstatic blissful days?
can you bring me back those precious unforgettable moments?
when every day was like miraculous dew-drops on the lotus-leaves,
shaking as if disappearing any moment,
fragile, but strangely permanent!
you are still perfect, there is no other you,
and I still wake up at ruby-red dawn to gaze at kaleidoscope mesmerizing sky!

Life Not Perfect Any More
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
reminiscing tranquil childhood which harmoniously flowed like a chartreuse waterfalls.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Me Poet Yeps Poet 14 May 2019

THIS IS A VERY NICE DAWN POETRY ON MY SECOND READ BUT MY DAWN WAS SHE SO LOVELY AND AS U SAY PERFECTLY DO READ MY DAWN BECKONS THEE

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 14 May 2019

NO MANS LIFE CAN EVER BE PERFECT THE RATIONALE CHANGES EVERY MOMENT JUST RELAX ALL HUMAN LIVES ARE LIKE THAT URS AND MINE 22222222222222222

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Yes, You are right, no one's life is perfect. Thank you.

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