Life On Earth's Heavens Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Life On Earth's Heavens

Rating: 5.0


The Mother Nature blesses
with the beauty and charm all it has
and the mountain creates value
and the valley is filled with trees
and the tree grows amazingly straight
Some peaks have snow
Like a bride, covering the head
Some are empty and barren
To make sound echo
Summers are delightful
With melting snow and gushing springs
Winters are harsh
Buries everything under snow cover
Life remains standstill
The summer heaven
Turns winter hell
Such is the life on earth's heaven.

Life On Earth's Heavens
Saturday, May 14, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A sketch on my recent visit to Kashmir Valley.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajnish Manga 15 May 2016

A thrilling landscape has been presented in the poem which brings to us the magic and the pristine beauty of Kashmir valley which has often been described as the Firdaus (Heaven) on earth. To cap it all, you have have done garnishing with different seasons. Thanks, Asim ji. Look at the scintillating scene- Some peaks have snow / Like a bride, covering the head

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Edward Kofi Louis 15 May 2016

Mother Nature! To respect and protect the earth. Nice work.

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Kelly Kurt 14 May 2016

My friend, Ayman had sent pictures of the valley in Kashmir where he lives, and it was the most beautiful sight. Your poem does the scenic place justice. A 10

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Akhtar Jawad 14 May 2016

Beauty of summer nicely described, wonderful poem.

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