Ala elouri

Life's Rules

Life is hard, Life has rules
We follow them in order not to lose
We try hard until we fall
We fall hard and say we didn't lose
We fight back until we win
We understand then life has rules
And if you follow them you will never lose.

Poem Submitted: Wednesday, September 23, 2009
Poem Edited: Sunday, January 8, 2012

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  • Kumarmani MahakulKumarmani Mahakul (3/28/2019 5:16:00 PM)

    Life is hard to live. But life has certain rules. This truth we should accept. From falling down we should learn and rise again. There is no chance of losing. An excellent poem is brilliantly penned.10

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  • Alexis Rolon (10/27/2009 1:24:00 PM)

    This is a very good poems hun!

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  • Lynn Glover (10/10/2009 4:25:00 PM)

    A very good poem, a good look at following rules. A very good write. thanks for the invite. God Bless, Your friend Lynn

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  • Marieta MaglasMarieta Maglas (10/8/2009 10:44:00 AM)

    nice conceptual poem, keep writing..........

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  • Obinna Eruchie (10/7/2009 1:51:00 PM)

    True, life determines how we live, and to be happy in life requires wisdom to enable us have sound and orderly lives.

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