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Life's Waves

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Shall I build a wave for you
Perhaps on which we may surf
It will curve with utter grace and fall
Perfectly in its place, to crumble what lies beneath
Pray it wont be your feet, (or another part)
I see it crashing now, I hear it falling
Falling from grace, do ride well
Its crumbling to its rightful
To its rightful place
Its flowing

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Paul Moosberg 16 June 2006

like a little tidal wave with the words too. sounds and looks great. really allots for more perceptions inside my mind. thank you.

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Patricia Gale 15 June 2006

Words that ring so true. Well done! Patricia

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