Saturday, December 28, 2013

Life With Struggles! Comments

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What a struggle an unborn baby makes to push his way into this beautiful world.
He cries with pain when a knife cuts him to separate from umbilical cord.
He cries when he opens his eyes for the first time he sees the light,
Surrendered by unknown voices and people.
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Geetha Jayakumar
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Kumarmani Mahakul 08 March 2018

Life Begins and Ends in Struggle! ........it is so true. To have a clarification you have portrayed this poem touchingly from birth to death. Beautiful poem.

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Uma Ram 05 May 2015

Lovely verses of the harsh struggles of life right from the birth conveyed beautifully mam. Thanks for the variety...please do read my female infanticide...thank you mam

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 29 December 2013

Problem of infant mortality and rapid decay with age nicely described. When life is steady people tend to fight among themselves. Hope we all realize this. Thank you for a nice poem.

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Geetha Jayakumar

Geetha Jayakumar

Kerala Palakkad
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