Light Of A Friend Poem by Sheldon Allen Saluta

Light Of A Friend

Rating: 5.0


Laying here in my bed
There is something penetrating like eating a dull lead
I don’t know exactly what it is
But it keeps swallowing my consciousness and fell in abyss

Don’t know how to get out
Nowhere and no one are the answer, I became stressed-out
I really wanted to shout and cry
But there is no sense of doing it, I walk alone and dry

Suddenly, light appears
Warming and welcoming rays cloth my endless mediocre
It fades my tears in constant motion
I fell somewhat happy and bliss, it diverts my attention

It’s new but I like it
It changes my info, loving me is what it commits
I grab the rare opportunity
I found it in the heart of a friend, free from insanity

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Auty Paul Jason 24 March 2011

Nice poem I will said you are in love with your friend. If not You got a real good humor at writing poems lady.

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 19 March 2011

A friend can light up your life...nice poem Sheldon.

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 19 March 2011

a trusted friend is really something you would always want to have... thanks for the share!

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I'm not sure mediocre fits... mediocrity might fit better. it seemed forced in areas, but that might be the varying line lengths. i liked the ending. God bless

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Fay Slimm 19 March 2011

The change in mood is well described here Sheldon and the need to give and to receive friendly love is expressed as first in importance if we want true happiness. A wise and fine-worded verse.

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