Kamiel Choi

Bronze Star - 2,902 Points (1979)

`light Of Love - Poem by Kamiel Choi

I stand next to the ocean
the light of our hotel room
is still reflected on the waves

I throw pebbles, pretending
they travel to the center
little stones rounded by aeons

The ocean wants to make peace
with everything. For a brief
moment I wanted to be found

in her embrace

Topic(s) of this poem: light, love, ocean, relationships

Form: Free Verse

Comments about `light Of Love by Kamiel Choi

  • Yolandey Share (12/7/2017 11:50:00 PM)

    Wow nicely said very passionate (Report) Reply

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  • Chinedu Dike (11/28/2017 4:14:00 AM)

    Beautiful love poem nicely penned from the heart. Lovely and very passionate. Thanks for sharing Kamiel. (Report) Reply

  • Bernard F. Asuncion (9/28/2017 1:01:00 AM)

    Such a lovely poem on relationship....a perfect 10++++ (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, September 27, 2017

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