Lawrence S. Pertillar

Gold Star - 48,706 Points (February/'47 / Connecticut, USA)

Like A Breath Of Fresh Air - Poem by Lawrence S. Pertillar

You don't have to make it rain.
You don't have to make it thunder.
Not pull a rabbit from a hat...
To make me wonder.

You don't have to glow at night,
Like a star shining bright.
Or be a leaf on a tree,
To get me...
To be a believer.

I can close my eyes and feel inside,
You are there...
Like a breath of fresh air.

I can close my eyes and feel inside,
You are there.

You don't have to make it rain.
You don't have to make it thunder.
I can close my eyes and feel inside,
You are there...
Like a breath of fresh air.

I can close my eyes and feel inside,
You are there.


Comments about Like A Breath Of Fresh Air by Lawrence S. Pertillar

  • Brian Jani (5/13/2014 11:10:00 AM)


    Amazing poem (Report) Reply

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  • Shane Clawson (12/14/2011 11:15:00 PM)


    This was written beautifully (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, December 14, 2011



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