Limerick-30 Poem by DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK

Limerick-30



Limerick-30
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I was confused between a rose and a dandelion
When I toiled to fix up my garden
Clueless I sat my fingers crossed
When my mother came and said
'Pull them, if it comes up, it's weed my son'

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Wes Vogler 26 December 2015

It has five lines other than that it is not a limerick...............

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Salini Nair 16 October 2014

enjoyed reading........nice

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Geetha Jayakumar 15 October 2014

Beautiful poem. Very true said, mothers guides the children through their experience... To be frank I have planted money plant and when ever I plant a tulsi plant or rose plant, it dies in a week. But I have seen the sowing seeds in farms...So I cannot write much on it....But I loved reading it.

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Valsa George 15 October 2014

Weeds don't have deep running roots, unlike a rose plant! Mothers learn many things from experience.....! Though I won't call it a limerick.... enjoyed this little poem!

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