Limerick-The Floozy-17 Poem by Loke Kok yee

Limerick-The Floozy-17

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There was this floozy from the outback
Who was adept at riding bareback
But her mouth was a put-off
And your plans would not takeoff
There were not any that would comeback

Limerick-The Floozy-17
Friday, April 6, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: humour
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 09 April 2018

Except for her teeth, i think her face is fine. A fine poem, Loke. The Floozy series is turning dynamic.

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Loke Kok Yee 13 April 2018

Thanks Geeta, I will keep working on it

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Valsa George 08 April 2018

Even if she is adept at back riding, no one will come to her seeing her appearance..............!

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loke kok yee 13 April 2018

She did up her teeth to let me write a limerick! Thanks Valsa

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Akhtar Jawad 07 April 2018

Yes, broken teeth come back only in the childhood but never after that. Enjoyed the poem.

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loke kok yee 10 April 2018

Not to worry, I am sure that there is nothing wrong with her teeth; she was just made up for a photo shoot.Thank you sir

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