Loke Kok yee


Limerick-The Great Hunter-5 - Poem by Loke Kok yee

This great hunter was out on a safari
A lion he needs to shoot for a trophy
But his rifle was lost
When the river he crossed
Now the lions hunt him for a dinner free

Topic(s) of this poem: nature

Form: Limerick


Comments about Limerick-The Great Hunter-5 by Loke Kok yee

  • Bri Edwards (8/13/2016 11:07:00 PM)


    cute! poor hunter. at least he didn't didn't get grabbed by a crocodile. with luck (for the human) , the lion will deliver an instantaneously fatal shot. i would think of a trophy lion as being a big male with an immense shaggy mane. the photo is funny, but it looks more like a female. i guess equal-gender opportunity.

    bri :)
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  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (11/10/2015 2:24:00 AM)


    Awesome.......He must be scared now and looking for a safe place to hide. (Report) Reply

  • Sanjukta Nag (10/26/2015 1:59:00 AM)


    Amazing amazing. Laughing out loud. Many thanks 10+ (Report) Reply

  • (10/25/2015 10:18:00 PM)


    Like your poem... And also the pictures too... :) Thank you (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, October 25, 2015



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