Loke Kok yee

Limerick-The Great Hunter-8 - Poem by Loke Kok yee

This great hunter was out to prove he was a hero
Went hunting for that nasty beast called a hippo
He took a wrong turn
The hippo wrath he earned
Very quickly he went from a hero to a zero

Topic(s) of this poem: nature

Form: Limerick

Comments about Limerick-The Great Hunter-8 by Loke Kok yee

  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (11/10/2015 2:23:00 AM)

    He should take lessons from Husain Bolt on how to run fast........Ha ha Lovely series..10++ (Report) Reply

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  • Melvina Germain (10/30/2015 7:44:00 AM)

    I'm smiling large Loke Kok Yee, another well done Limerick..... (Report) Reply

  • Sanjukta Nag (10/29/2015 9:18:00 AM)

    LOL! Hippo can turn a hero into a zero. Enjoyed really: D (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (10/29/2015 5:59:00 AM)

    It is very sad that great hunter got diminished from hero to zero. One shouldn't have proud. Well composed. (Report) Reply

  • Valsa George (10/28/2015 11:18:00 PM)

    How sad with the hard earned glory vanished, the great hunter has dwindled from a hero to a zero! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, October 28, 2015

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