Limerick- Well Prepared Poem by Indira Renganathan

Limerick- Well Prepared

Rating: 5.0


I sit with my laptop well prepared
Feeling good with a mind fresh and flared
I work for a while well
Soon yawns out I sleep well
Wife shouts'lunch full and sleep well prepared'

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 10 April 2019

Thank you dear madam for yor response and keen interest. Now it is really a gorgeous limerick with fun and humor to enjoy.10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 08 April 2019

The beginning two lines differ as per the limerick rule aabba and all other lines are ok and interesting with fun. Enjoyed. Thanks for sharing.

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Indira Renganathan 09 April 2019

Thank you Kumar for your corrections...I have corrected....request you to visit again to read them...God bless you

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