Limitless Lust Poem by Aqeb Benazir Ibn Minar

Limitless Lust

Rating: 4.8


Introduction: Limit itself has a limit of its own…

A walk, mile after mile
In quest for my lost soul,
I had forgotten how to smile
Everything felt out of control,
I fought too hard to be worthwhile
By that I got lost in my life’s hole

The regrets for mistakes I’ve made
It took me off the edge, way too far away;
Yet I tried again so hard to get off from that shade
But got caught up in my brutal fray,
The same song keeps playing with such a vicious rage,
I find myself down to my knees, nowhere to go - So I pray

A prayer to leave the worst and move onto more,
Come off this fantasy and onto reality, to be -
Closer to something I’ve been fighting for
The touch of the light cutting through the night, it rains down upon me
As I overcome the grief and believe, recovery lies ashore,
Only three steps remain, to be fixed and free.

A lesson of value I earned from my faults -
Never push yourself off the edge,
You’ll lose the only key to the vault
A life you never had to live – It too could forever be lost,
So stay confined within the limits of the limit
As it seems - Your control over lust, only can make you complete.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lovable Wisdom 06 September 2011

this poem is very inspiring keeps the reader thinking and at first i was skeptical about the title but at the end u turned it around

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Cecelia Olivaira 05 September 2011

wow... that really good! i really like it its so wonderful! keep it up :)

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Victoria Horn 30 August 2011

I really liked it! I do feel this way at times, it explains a lot. Keep it up!

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Mandi June 29 August 2011

It's an absolute joy to read your work! Thank you so much for sharing this poem, and all of your beautiful writings...Each one has such a strong message and you have a real gift with powerful wording and emotion. Keep it up! ! Can't wait to read more!

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Anthony Zeigler 29 August 2011

Reading your poems either teaches me a lesson or brings out the emotion i have. I love your poems..I really do...-Bookmarks-

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Rita Kele 23 October 2011

Beautifully written and well received!

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Allemagne Roßmann 08 October 2011

Lust has itself in an unending pleasure for the infinity.Established well.

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Jessie Hopkins 27 September 2011

This poem was wonderful. I can't wait to read more.

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Crimson Love 24 September 2011

Beautiful poem! Very well written. 'A lesson of value I earned from my faults ' My favorite line ^_^

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Naida Nepascua Supnet 24 September 2011

MISTAKES ARE COMMITTED LESSONS ARE LEANED PRAYER IS USED THESE WORDS THAT REMAINED IN MY THOUGHTS FROM THIS POEM IS VERY SIGNIFICANT

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