Listen! Poem by Nosheen Irfan

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I'm in love
But not to wither
In wait

Love has a big heart
To bear and starve
But not to cry forever
At coldness

My love is real
As sure as the day
Don't judge my love
By its endurance

For everything in life
Is mortality-bound
Though my love is unworldly
Surviving your silence

Love put to test
Will die from thirst
Or if it lives
Will look a naked tree

Don't stay away
Or love will have its way
Flying here and there
To find a new nest

Tuesday, March 17, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: feelings,love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 13 February 2022

Love has a big heart to bear and starve but not to cry forever...beautifully expressed. A fantastic poem. Top score! !

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Dr Antony Theodore 28 June 2020

For everything in life Is mortality-bound Though my love is unworldly Surviving your silence Your love growing into noble sphere. tony

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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 March 2020

Love can't be judged by it's endurance. It is has much more depth that we can't measure. Dear madam, you have so poignantly inscribed this poem on love and feeling. Beautiful poem really.10

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Kostas Lagos 17 March 2020

The adventure of love masterfully depicted!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 17 March 2020

It's a wonderful love poem! Happy to read your poem after a long gap! Keep it up!

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Nosheen Irfan

Nosheen Irfan

Lahore, Pakistan
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