Wednesday, August 19, 2015

Little Rain Comments

Rating: 4.8

Your gaze pierce my heart and my soul
As mine backs off for things I haven't told
Afraid that you'll see what it must not show
I'm so tired of thinking where this could go
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Jean Luna
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Jazib Kamalvi 25 January 2018

A good start with a nice poem, Jean. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Chinedu Dike 26 August 2015

Love is a spiritual experience that affects all and sundry profoundly. It comes when it pleases and settles where it pleases. It's a lovely piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely penned from the heart with good rhyme scheme. Thanks for sharing Jean. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Allotey Abossey 25 August 2015

Wow... Beautiful poem. Good work

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Kelly Kurt 19 August 2015

A poem written with a personal touch. Nice!

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Akhtar Jawad 19 August 2015

A touching love story, nicely penned....................................10

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David Wood 19 August 2015

After a little rain the sun will shine. Good poem.

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David Wood 19 August 2015

After a little rain the sun will shine. Happiness may push sorrow out from a persons soul. Good poem.

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